Feedback - How to improve the film

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Action Plan

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Rough Cut of Filming

Roland Barthes' Theory

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Non-Linear Narrative

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Film Certification Research

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Action Plan

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Continuation of Research for Main Task

This video has an eery sense of mystery behind it meaning it will benefit us from watching it as it means that we will see how a murder mystery film can be portrayed. Even though our film has a different storyline, we can take aspects of this film such as the music choice and the fear that is shown to help develop our film further. 

Further Research for Main Task

By looking at this video, it has inspired us to try and include some of the opening credits that they have used such as the scrabble game on the fridge and the post-it notes and by doing this we can help show the narrative of the film by using credits that will compliment the film. This will make the opening scene of the film more engaging and interesting as it will show creativity in the way it has been introduced.

Evaluation of the second attempt

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Second attempt at the video

Continuation of Main Task Research & Production Ideas

Even though this film is a different genre, we can take the idea of the volume of the music changing to show intense moments in the film or when suspense is building. This film uses different ways to show the opening credits to the film such as the writing on the paper and although it't not overly creative we can use this to benefit us in a way that will make it seem more exciting. 

Main Task Research & production Ideas

This opening scene uses speech which is something we decided to do in our first attempt of the film and in this film it is being used in a different way as it is portraying an eery and creepy place the girl is in and this is complimented by the sound effects and the selection of music chosen. If we were to keep the speech it would be a good idea to use music as well to make the narrative of the film stronger. 

Evaluation of Attempt One

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First attempt at the video